谁能帮我挑错误,,[英文]

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Dear ***:
Hi!
Name:Kai***,Xiao.

Age:11.27.1**5

Height:1**cm

Weight:**kg

Educational History:
01-06***PrimarySchool [***,Shenzhen,China]
07-now,**MiddleSchool [***,Shenzhen,China]

Hobby:Computer,Read book,Singing.

Tel:0086-13428****68

Address:602.HaiTianChamber.***** Garden.
*** Road.*****,ShenZhen.GuangDong,China.

Postalcode:518000

Dear ***:
Hi!
Name:Kai***,Xiao.

Age:11.27.1**5

Height:1**cm

Weight:**kg

(Education) History:
01-06***PrimarySchool [***,Shenzhen,China]
07-(present),**MiddleSchool [***,Shenzhen,China]

Hobby:Computer,Read book,Singing.

Tel:0086-13428****68

Address:602.HaiTianChamber.***** Garden.
*** Road.*****,ShenZhen.GuangDong,China.

(Post code):518000

错的都在括号里面.你就这么点给别人人家知道是什么吗?连句问候都没有